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Ku

steam floats above
a fragrant flower
hand painted teacup

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  • marlene47 silver member
    August 4

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    This is good!
    Like a mini world - full of atmosphere, scent and refined elegance... or, as in everything else disappears but this moment.


  • azure85 gold member
    August 4

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    Ah, a lovely scene and full of the fragance of the tea and flower. I enjoyed the wonderful image of the cup itself, thank you for a great haiku!