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Excuses

I give you the means
Both online and paperback
To read my writes
To see my passion for Ink
To understand me for me
Yet you choose to ignore my writes
The excuse is all the same
You were to busy
You forgot
You lost the address
I do not understand
Am I not Family
Am I not a friend
AM I not good enough
For you to take the time
To show some interest
In me or my passion
I guess not

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  • ScarsFade
    August 4

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    I love it, i think you are worth it! Sometimes people can jsut be really self involved and don't want to think about others....much <3....scars

    • Poetic Hearts
      August 4
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      It seems like the only ppl who think that I m worth it are the ones I meet on Allpoetry and not my family and friends.

      Thank you ScarFade for your support.