Look I been eating this way
since my very first day.
I've always been a big girl
mushy crap makes me hurl.
I'm telling you the truth
I couldn't even wait for my first tooth.
I see you eating steak,
put some of that on my plate.
I always loved hot dogs and beans
gimme the good stuff you know what I mean?
How you think I got this long hair
It's the food I eat, my dear.
So when you're having a party
Just know I'm gonna eat hearty.
Be sure there's enough
AND NOT NONE OF THAT BABY STUFF!!
In a list
A contest entry
- Just cause I like showin' off my grandbabies! #3 by Gypsy Via Orleans.
600 points, ended August 8, 9 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Honest opinions....
Comments
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Excellent
What a great write. And so well expressed. Congrats on the silve

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I really like the flow and rhyme, its well put together
Thanks for sharing! Have a good day (:
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sweet picture also i'm guessing that's your daughter.. she's pretty..
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Thank you, no but it is another poet on this site's granddaughter, I wrote this for her contest...thanks for reading....
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haha.. very great.. i liked it..


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