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Gerber...Never Heard of It!

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Look I been eating this way
since my very first day.
I've always been a big girl
mushy crap makes me hurl.

I'm telling you the truth
I couldn't even wait for my first tooth.
I see you eating steak,
put some of that on my plate.

I always loved hot dogs and beans
gimme the good stuff you know what I mean?
How you think I got this long hair
It's the food I eat, my dear.

So when you're having a party
Just know I'm gonna eat hearty.
Be sure there's enough
AND NOT NONE OF THAT BABY STUFF!!


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  • penman gold member
    September 29
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    Excellent

    What a great write. And so well expressed. Congrats on the silve


  • Oh.My.Juliet
    August 12

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    I really like the flow and rhyme, its well put together

    Thanks for sharing! Have a good day (:

    x


  • Supertramp gold member
    August 6

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    sweet picture also i'm guessing that's your daughter.. she's pretty..

    • Thank you, no but it is another poet on this site's granddaughter, I wrote this for her contest...thanks for reading....


  • Supertramp gold member
    August 6
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    haha.. very great.. i liked it..

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