"Yo Grandma don't run.
Riding this is not fun.
Get me off this thing,
before the chime rings.
That's when he opens his mouth,
to gulp me up and take me south.
Into his gigantic belly,
man I should have brought my cellie.
So I could call 911.
Did I mention I'm not having fun?
I'm dizzy and nauseated
Ah just forget it.
I guess my times up!
Stop laughing, shut up.
Whew its slowing down.
Can I get off now?
The ride has come to an end.
Grandma, grandma can I go again?"
In a list
A contest entry
- Just cause I like showin' off my grandbabies! #2 by Gypsy Via Orleans.
600 points, ended August 7, 5 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Things that make you say awwww!! by PurpleSky.
550 points, ended October 27, 25 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Honest opinions....
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Excellent
What a great write. So very funny. Thank you for sharing -
lol sounds like my brother when he gets on a ride. this actualy made me laugh. thanks for the write and for taking the time to enter our contest. G0od luck
huggles
Lena -
This is so funny and cute
and true to life
I have heard this more times then I could count
cutest little guy
God bless you my friend...
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hahaha that is great! My son is terrified of that ride as well. That and the huge rat that wanders around making infants cry.
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Wonderful
Aww this is great. So very well written. Congrats on the gold.
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Hahaha.
Another great peice! Is that your son? ^_^ He's so adorable!
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LOL This Is Great
I am so glad I saw this poem! It has great flow and rhyme with all the feelings of a childs mind.
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thank you for coming bya nd commenting!
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This is so sweet and humourous. I love it. I will read more and give points when I get some. I am new so can't now. Great poem.
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thank you so much and welcome to AP!!!!
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lol... love it... a cute piece,
hugs,
georgie,
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thanks its so great to see I was worried I'm glad you're ok!!!
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Yours was Rapping good fun. I like all the commotion going on in dire straits --until the ride stops and he's ready to do it all again!You had fun with this one, and I did too reading it. Best of Luck with this entry!
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Thank you I enjoyed yours tremendously glad you enjoyed mine good luck to you too.
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this reminds me of our trip to Disney World. They had a new ride ... it was a really fast roller coaster ... blaring lights and rock & roll music as you went 200 MPH up and down and sidewise. I have seizures so couldn't go on it. My 8 year old grandaughter begged, (BelleMorte to you ) her gramps took her on. When they got off he was pale, his hair standing on end and she's saying, "Grandpa, can we go again?" lmao
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That is so funny, isn't that how kids are though, I love it!!!
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interesting write LOL
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It wasn't finished...lol, now its done...take a peek
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