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Shadow hands embrace me
as you turn around...
Face to face


The scent of cigarettes
lingers on my lips—
perfectly decadent,
bittersweet romance –


Kissing the tears away,
Feeding the hunger,
higher and higher
into a roaring flame – as deafening as the beat of your racing heart.

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  • xeroabyss II
    August 13
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    Reminds me of a dream I can't remember having, but remember feeling.
    If that makes sense.


  • kerrypn
    August 5
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    Really like this-second verse particularly


  • silent Evil
    August 5

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    ..it is not that long but i can get the thought of it.,.
    if you will make it any longer it could be much better..cause even in that short verse i can think many things..especially the things that can make me realize what really is myself..!
    thanks,.. good luck..
    it's great..

    may i ask a question ..?
    are you the person being described in that poem..?