I wait to hear from you,
But I can't hold my breath any longer.
My face is turning blue,
And my heart keeps beating stronger.
I search longingly,
Hoping to find some trace of you left.
I pray heartily,
Hoping there is someone to guide me.
I hurt desperately,
But the emotions just bury themselves inside.
I cry casually,
Telling everyone I'm stronger than the pain.
But aren't those tears full of lies?
There's no reason for tears in my eyes.
I ought to just cope with life head held high,
I ought to look perfect and never tell a lie.
What a lie.
I can't look you straight in the face,
I look sideways or upward to find some space.
Maybe I will stare at the ground,
As my heart begins to pound.
For I can't tell you how I feel inside,
It would just be a lie.
I hate this poem.
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I don't think you hate the poem but hate the feelings you felt/feel when you read/wrote it. Things happen and sometimes they suck but your words are beautiful in their painful elegance. Your words are easily relatable and strike very vivid memories but your words are crafted where you can visit the memories, relive their pain, and then admire the flow of emotions you created. Well done.
<3Betrayals...(they suck)...
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thanks
<3 the comment you left on my poem, you're right i hated the feeling rather than the poem. Great insight on life
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moonlight vampire
aww i love this poem it's very touvhing to the heart becuse this is how u feel -
your true emotions can never be a lie, trying to keep someone from the truth is the only lie you can tell. Anyways this was fabulous and real, well structured and it made a lot of sense I have been there before, well written....much <3...scars.
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