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Alone

Drag the cover and sheets
Just below my chin
Take a glance to my left
Let the loneliness sink in
The sands of time scrape away
I lose what’s left of me
But even as days go by
I'm stained with your memory
The thoughts of you come in waves
They crash and flood my head
I wonder if I’ll ever sleep
In this empty bed
Because I’ve been chained to our past
And marred by your choice
I could whisper “I love you”
But you never heard my voice

Author notes

I wanted to write more but my brain is fried and i just don't care anymore. Sometimes I feel so used up and lonely and for as much as I think about you I wonder if you ever once thought about me at all.

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  • moonrays
    August 24
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    Wow

    Dude shes not right for you.....shut up none of my business huh? lol great poetry though


    • illusive
      August 25

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      Thank you for considering my poetry "great" but I'm a little fuzzy on the other remark made.


      • moonrays
        August 25
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        Too Funny

        Sorry Natasha When I read your poem I had this huge flashback of after my ex and I broke up. Just assumed another guy like me. Sorry you had to feel all lonely and stuff and call you dude lmao. I make many mistakes no hard feelings..............and again great poetry!


  • Loves Requiem
    August 6
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    Tis how I feel about someone too. ..

    Oh how I wish this was about me..

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