I close my eyes to look at you,
To view you in a new, more brillitant light
It really makes quite a sight!
As innocent as your movements seem,
Your touch can flow around me like a stream.
This sensation surges throughout my body,
Making my legs rather, embody.
My spine dances and curves,
Shooting around my fervent nerves!
Nevermind my closed eyes,
For its my open spirit that flies.
I don't know what's come over me.
This phenomenon of glee,
Both intoxicating and tantalizing...
Almost as uncertain as a box spring,
Yet as undoubtful as your promise.
With such, I know my heart is riskless.
This warm glow, as soft as snow,
Will hide inside to aide and guide.
Cause this blissful glow.. heh.. whoa...
Cannot be contained.. merely trained.
Author notes
I'm very tired, just woke up from a dream. It's almost 2 in the morning... and I just wrote this down on a piece of paper not too long ago. It's not exactly in poem form, but I thought it was kinda neat, at least for having been written while half asleep haha
Any Critics Are Appreciated!
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What a wonderful feel that you have to this poem, such energy even though you jsut woke up from a dream it feels like you just woke up and your eyes are wide open for the first time. This feel to this poem reminded me a phenomenl women by maya angelou which is one of my favorite poems it had the same essence to it well written and well done...much <3....scars.
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