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A Violent Victory

I'm twisted in a torturous web
I look to the skies and prey they don't fall down
And as I'm staring at the stars all I see is you
Stars I know that you're looking at too

I'm enveloped in all these things
That are tying me to this place
They're like silk bandages bonding me
Restricting my space
This place is dark and looming
With unholy demise
I can hear the lightning
Shatter the clouded skies

You said, "My dear,
You can't fight fate"
I said "Maybe I can't."
Beware when you come for me
Violent victory awaits

I thrash like a trapped fly, terrified
But it's only me and the web.
I contemplate on if there's truth
In what the prophet said
She took my by the hand and warned me
Of this awful place
She flew me to the heavens
Where I stared god in the face

"My dear", god said,
"You can't fight fate"
I said "The hell I can't"
Now I just sit here, listening
As violent victory awaits

And now the question is
Will you rescue me
Or let this icy grip
Be the death of me

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