the things in my head scares me
the things i think should be declared inhuman
imaginary friends? imaginary places? imaginary moments
they confuse me
a maze of thoughts
clouds my mind
i am lost in my being
happiness brightness up my mind
like running in a field
filled with sunflowers
sadness brings rain clouds
to haunt me
and anger brings a thunderstorm
my mind can be my oasis
at the moments
i wish i was deaf
so no one can invade my mind through soud
i wish i was blind
so no one cane invade my mind with images
i wish i was mute
so i cant repeat the heavenly moments
my mind can be my hell
at those moments
i want to escape
so i let others in hoping they can invade it so much
they push me out
and i lose my mind
A contest entry
- Whatever by Candyknife.
1800 points, ended August 15, 23 entries
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Comments
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well this is really hard to read cause i can relate totally and this made me feel more confused interesting take though there are many times i try and explain this and havent been able and here you spill the same feeling freely nice write -
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thank you. but you said you were confused by it. if so which line(s)? if not sorry i might have read wrong cause there wasn't any punctuation =]
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