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Jack and Jill went up the hill to murder their dear daddy
Jack pushed him down and sliced his throat
and Jill cried this is dandy

Murder on wall...shards as they fall

Humpty dumpty sat on the wall
I took a sledge and cracked his haul
blood it ran blood it caked
his "poor" skull rudely staked

up on the wall...murderin the garden

Ring around the rosie
pocket full of posie
Atue Atue...

We All Fall DEAD!

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  • Macsword
    September 5
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    Wild and Crazy!

    Killed off everyone! Egad! (Blood everywhere!) Oh my!


  • annother gold member
    August 21
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    This reads very quickly, I think it makes it very intriguing. Good job! Best of luck in the contest.