The light so bright it hurts the eyes
Is the same that graces the night skies
When reflected in the face of gentle moon
The harshness of late afternoon
Calls one to stop and contemplate
One's place
One's life
One's love
One's fate
Author notes
Kelle Marie,
What I think I am trying to say is don't stare strait into the source of your pain; look only at its reflection in the face of a trusted friend. Your son would want you to be happy in his memory. He is close by, only a whisper away; he can listen; and may be allowed to speak to your heart in dreams...
A contest entry
- Write Me A Poem About Joy & Happiness In Relationships by stavykm.
1050 points, ended August 8, 10 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Just Beautiful
Wow this was just excellent!!Very deep and rich in meaning of one's very existence. I loved your poem and your beautiful wisdom and insight to life. I'm still in awe for I thought this is just brilliant. You know I was really able to soak in the poem before I ever even read the author notes and then I cried. Thank you for your loving compassion and for writing for my contest. Beautiful just beautiful, thank you again for your loving support!!!
Wishing You Many Blessings,
Much Love Always,
Kelle Marie
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Beautiful.
Yes. This is all I want to say. Beautiful.
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Wow! you have captured the big few questions of life in the most thought provoking way! good work Cheers!
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Thank you
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