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My In and Out

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You get things
That no one else sees.
You know me in ways
I don't even know myself.
You are my everything
That's why I love you.

I may have my doubts,
I am only human,
But I know
You were made for me.
I know
You complete me.

You see me
In a way that takes my breath away.
You astound me
Everyday, in all ways.
I can not complain,
I have to admit,
I want for absolutely nothing.

Sometimes I know
I take you for granted
But my heart is yours
You possess all of me
No piece of me
Does not belong to only you.

You are the one thing
I never question.
You are all that I KNOW
With passionate conviction.
No one can tell me
A thing about you
That I haven't known for lifetimes.

You are my in and out,
You are mine
I am yours.
Even when you piss me off
It is you I run to for comfort.
My best friend,
My soul.
The human side of me.

My one true weakness.
My greatest strength.
My man.

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For my constant one. - cgirl0410

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  • secberm
    October 23

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    Awww... And here with this title and my dirty mind, I thought this was erotica. Nonetheless, it's beautiuful. Write on, sweetie.

    Dez

  • Bigz7551
    August 8

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    Once again you have me sucked into your world! This is raw feelings, it's right to the point and I really feel you pouring everything into every word. Well done!


  • Whenitefallz
    August 6

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    You knew I'd be here. Poignant dedication - even to the point of loving 'til decay, if you don't mind my momentary macabre. Even when "two" is past tense. Very, VERY nice Madame ..


  • She burns
    August 5

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    Your most touching and deeply heartfelt write yet, I hope you show him this, just so sweet and beautiful, so loving beyond words


  • MyrddinEmrys silver member
    August 4
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    True love, sheer poetry


  • geminiblacc silver member
    August 3

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    Wow. how sweet! Man....your man is lucky, as im sure you are too. I love how you worded your connection with him. It felt so real as I was reading it. I love it. As always my poetic sister, you never disappoint. =)

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