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Please Don't Let Go

I'm on the edge
Please don't push me off
My life is in your hands
Please don't let go
I'm going to fall
So pull me up
But you let me go
And I fell into the water
As I fall under the blue
I thought you didn't care
But you jumped in after me,
You saved me from the waves
I wasn't breathing so you gave me life,
The kiss of life and I was back
Ready to do it all over again

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  • GraveyardGoddess
    August 3
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    A-a-a-a-a-a-amazingg.

    I love your poems dear. <3


    • xxBlackSnowFallxx
      August 3
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      Thank You....I was watching a science show about water and cliffs so this just popped in my mind