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Linger

The feel of your touch
From years ago
Still lingers.

In my dreams
I speak to you,
You corrupt me.

You are the one
That still lingers.

The taste of your lips
Honeydew on my mouth
Leaves me in a daze.

I have not forgotten
The way
Of...
Everything.

You are the one
That still lingers.

I found your number
But I can't call
I left you for a reason.

But I still think about you
Still feel our connection
Know you were the one.

You are the one
That still lingers.

Left the footprints
Of your heart
Imbedded in my soul.

I still linger
Still burn
From the scorch of your love.

You are the one
That still lingers.

You are the one
That still lingers.

Author notes

First love. Soul mate? Never know what could have been. But you still linger. - cgirl0410

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  • Little Green
    August 30

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    I really like this...I can feel the sweet pain of self control clawing at you here in moments of weakness. He must've been good...but a little bit bad too. Ain't it always the way?


  • Ez Writer silver member
    August 23

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    A splendid write Tiffany , very capturing !
    Unique and eloquently expressed through out .
    Thank you for sharing ! A delightful read indeed ..
    Best wishes & hugs , Friend Easy


  • She burns
    August 5
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    So true here, everything about, remembering once more, because the feelings always stays there...


  • mgmc gold member
    August 3

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    I like it & know it.

    I like this poem a lot and certainly understand the feelings behind it. I'm not so familiar with the form (repetition) but like the style very much. Is it meant to be a song? My favorite parts...................."I have not forgotten the way of......Everything" and
    also "Left the footprints of your heart imbedded in my soul." Will read more of your poems!