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Unspoken

How long must I endure
Pretending?
This pretense?
This prelude to a kiss?
This midsummer's night dream?
Shakespeare never had it right
The unspoken words between
You and I
Are so much better.

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It's already there. - cgirl0410

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  • She burns
    August 5
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    The tension and silence in between, somehow this is very true, it's much better...


  • sahdana silver member
    August 3

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    ugh oh/////

    you done done it again!!!! LOL I JUST LOVE THIS AND SO FEW WORDS WITH POWER-NOW THAT'S MY STYLE!!! excellent...this deserves an A++...and, by the way, as usual....I can relate...gyrrrl!!!!