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To Be A Part

Some guidance and thought
to encourage your way.
Always positive comments
to influence your day.

Never inhibit, always respect
remember to give
and never neglect
YOURSELF, YOUR IDEAS,
YOUR HEART, YOUR SOUL.

Provide a path for growing and giving.
Learn to branch out and be wise in your living.
Acceptance and knowledge
and never fear.
Close your eyes and LAUGH
your future is near.

So a sister or an auntie
I would be pleased to be,
accept that and you will
have the REAL ME

Author notes

[peace.love.unity.respect]
ACRONYM PLUS...COOL....
NAMASTE...

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  • Angelo di Luce gold member
    August 10

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    Nice thoughts indeed and so nicely put on paper
    Only never give your soul to no one, is yours to keep and belongs to none
    without it you cannot excist
    Other than that, all`s fine
    Blessed be


  • PastelMoons gold member
    August 4

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    Wise words from
    a beautiful soul !
    This is so sweet and
    so uniquely you..
    Thank you for sharing
    and best wishes in the contest!

    ~Pastel


  • endless-lover silver member
    August 3

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    Some guidance and thought
    to encourage your way.
    Always positive to
    influence your day.

    Never inhibit, always respect
    remember to give
    and never neglect
    YOURSELF, YOUR IDEAS,
    YOUR HEART, YOUR SOUL.


    this was stunning doll :]
    i loved it mucho so a finalist !!!

    thanks mucho

    -vanna