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This Girl

In my dreams you are there
A cute soul with red hair
A girl with loving heart
with promises of never tearing me apart.

At night or during day
Out of my mind she’s never away
I’m daydreaming of her
I daydream more and more.

She’s an angel who brings love to me
Fills me with angelic ecstasy
Her presence soothes my soul
I’m in love with this girl.

Author notes

Written : 3 August 2009 Monday, 6:38:15 PM
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  • Patpowers silver member
    August 8
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    Nice romantic write Shuberth...liked this one a lot...THANKS!


  • Blissfullhatred silver member
    August 4
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    lovely write


  • lonleyteardrops
    August 4
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    aww, that was so sweet, great write. love ya,


  • mcope8050
    August 4

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    I love your style

    it's ALWAYS a joy to read your additions,,, this showed heartfelt emotions and feelings and conveyed them WONDERFULLY!!! thanks for sharing


  • kel dog
    August 3
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    a very cute write from ya. three clappies.

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