Melodies of Asian vines creeping up my soul
Beauty unfolds on the pages of my life;
The ink gone from darkness to the tint of sunset snow
My life is purified.
The night's wisdom has blessed me
No longer burned by the day's revealing ways;
It tries to show a path to camoflauge and similarity.
My bloom is with the spring;
I awaken from winter
And I know I have been washed by icy clarity.
In my beauty and unimaginable tint
I'll flow through the eyes
Unto the minds of many;
I wonder if I captivate.
Author notes
Prompt: Wisteria
A contest entry
- Colors by poets whisper.
400 points, ended August 4, 3 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Again, not very good...
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Very wild and beautiful lass,
it very strange that i just finished a new piece
with almost the same message and language....
i would not touch one thing here...
in fact if you do I think I will go mad....
I enjoy your work.
your kindness in taking time to read my work
is extremely complementary to me ...
you are a fantastic natural writer little gypsy,
i love this one so.....
if you would like to read mine at your leisure here it is.....
kinda of Poe-ish...i have dark piece of work and a wee brighter...
...The Shadows of Sound...
Bless your heart lass,
Liam
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Ha!
Thank you~ And I'll happily read it! And Poe is my favorite poet, loved him since I was ten.
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This is really beautiful... I really love the awesome imagery you've used consistently throughout this piece. Just brilliant. Good job using just a single word prompt! I'm jealous!
Good luck in your contest!
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great job with the prompt. thank you for entering. I have the plant growing outside of my bedroom ... there are a lot of shades of purple and I love them all.
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This is a very lovely write... I knew the plant but didn't know it was the name of the colour too. XD I always just called them 'purple'...
In any event, after checking out the wisteria some more and coming back to read this poem, I liked it even more. I'm not sure what it is abotu it that draws my attention so much, it has a lot going for it.
Good luck in the contest!
~Sparrow
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your color is: wisteria
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Woah...
Never heard of that one. AWESOME~ -
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WOW!!
It's beautiful~ ^^ Thanks!
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