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my own angel cried

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The angel cried upon my life

even after my demise,  water

flew from her eyes

 

I tried and tried to help you

all through out your life,  as

my hand was near you holdi

ng that knife

 

I was there wiping your tears

each and everyday,    I whisp

ered into your ear and say,

       Oh! child I am here

 

I was there year after year as

your family gathered with there

family at a thanksgiving cheer

 

I was there when you felt so all

alone,  even at the family reunion

where every one seemed grown up

and that child inside and you wept

in silence all so very alone

 

I was there when you saw children

as a curse,   why not Me God as a

dad,  why was everyone gifted all

so very well,   Oh  it is me Brad the

child all grown up and so very very

              sad

 

 

 

 

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waya

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