Feather raised in hand
Face pointed to a dark sky
He chants for healing
Author notes
Haiku. Prompt - solar eclipse.
A contest entry
- [ Haiku ] - Solar Eclipse by Malabu.
1200 points, ended September 4, 36 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Will you plant something and help to clean our atmosphere?
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Hoodwink!!
Wow this is just stunning, it captures so much faith and hope in this short form. Beautifully and poetically done. best to you in the contest
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Hood-Wink!
I really liked the hopeful tone of this poem and how clearly you conveyed your message in so few words. I also liked the question above the comment box. Cheers
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Hoodwinked!!
Oh My this touches deep and Adore the words You have weaved
also the Energy this evokes
Powerful piece and I Love reading Haikus
Now writing them for me another story
but digesting them~ Yummooooooo
You have also been Hoodwinked by The Poetic Bandits
Keep that quill dancing
Thank You for sharing Your Talent
Best wishes in the contest
with love & light~ Desire~*~
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HOODWINKED !
You did a great job on this haiku. I really enjoy them myself. The words you used in such a short piece mean a lot too. Your imagery and flow was great. Keep on penning. Congrats on being Hoodwinked by the Bandits.
Hugs, Sam I Am
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Hood-Wink!
Great Haiku!
Chanting for healing opens up a world of spirituality and life that alot turn their backs on but I think you've opened this so well even a cynic would appreicate it
♥
Stay safe
~Manda
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HOODWINKED !
A very nice and unique Haiku! I like the culture and nature blend in this thoughtful piece, it stirs the imagination as all good poetry should. Write on dear poet.
You have been Hoodwinked today by the Poetic Bandits
because WE CARE!
Dennis 
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I like this native indian ku...
the imagery of a the old one like the sun and moon
natural medicine for healing through the spirits
I do feel this falls more into a senryu though...
I could be wrong?
all the same it to me is a wonderful ku
thanks so much for your lovely entry here
mal -
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Thanks for your comment. It's a Haiku.
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a powerful short poem, full and descriptive verses, a re rich in imagery and tell the reader the meaning of the events very well...PK
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Well done.
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