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Why do us KIDS SUFFER FROM SO MUCH PAIN??

Why is it that only kids fear so much pain
Yet people might think it’s a game.
Poverty is not a silly name,
Its how kids started to feel that they were to be blamed.

Kids feel bad and feel so ashamed
Because poverty wasn’t there future aim

We might think it’s a war game
But no it brings so much misery and shame.

It isn’t a picture frame that you may see every week
Its what happens everyday in today’s society.
It’s poverty that destroyed the world
And the true beauty of this world.

This is how kids turned so skinny
No wonder they are mini.

Raising your hands and praying to god is good
But yet not enough!

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  • Ellis gold member
    August 5

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    Greed is the problem

    Adults are the cause. Adults are to blame. All people should support one another. Of course they all do not. The ones who don't are the problem.


  • chilequeen gold member
    August 4

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    Very nice poem

    How very true: I love the line 9 "It isn't a picture frame .........." it says to me that life is being lived behind the picture frame but not everyone's eyes can see-or wants to see. It's in the "(not)beauty" of the beholder.