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War

The darkest star
So desolate and far
Points to a broken light
That fills the soul with spite

Turn twist and fall
From your pedestal so tall
Crashing to the Earth from my Heavenly Hell
Spreading the stink and rotting smell

Blaspheme and curses
Cutthroats and stolen purses
The hate that smiles and laughs.
The greed that takes both halves

Give! Give! Is what they say
Upon their broken knees they pray
For the suffering to stop
At hopes final drop

I cry a shade of red
As bullets fill malformed head
End of all
At the silence call

Calm and black
Fiery attack
All is gone
Army strong.

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