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Rambling

he spins with rum and coke;
and I'm left a statue of fury;
burrowing under kaleidoscope fashion;
  a huger even a god couldn't fill...



even if there were such a thing.



A God.

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  • styrofoam
    August 3, 2009
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    your rambling is poetry.

    i'm sure you're still editing this... hunger.