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Kinetic Menace

As I wait...could ask them to skip the trial(guilty no less)
the hunt of devine beast was good, oh the blood lust, and there are no regrets.
Was satisfying even digesting and the pleasure of maidens at my feet, this plane my own cast me out punish my heaven.
Men and women worship me more then god itself
and I say "no just honor your lives".
Now butterflies fill the room and sinister as ever.
Death is never to be feared, it is the judgement, the god of creation.
Face and embrace it oblivion,
it's the waiting I can't stand....
but you can't steal my pleasure, not till then....
face and embrace the end.
A fever so bold yet melancholic.
A person so bitter yet so kind.

Author notes

He ate of a heavenly lion so he could be as God. As only a mere test that he had failed his father now ashamed falls from grace to live amongst us. Nontheless he gained power in the mortal realm(money,women,fame) but beyond that there was only pain of his treason to the throne.
Put a little tiger in the tank with consequences.

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  • ahhhh this is well penned your thoughts
    soon in hand as satisfy ever maiden had
    with a sinister smile and wicked grin
    no one stole you pleasure not then LOL
    hugs Angel♥