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Enemy In Sight?

Battle weary joints in intuitions arrayed lines,  
Reconnoiter the ballistic armor dish,
Spy work encounters soft voluptuous designs,
Muzzle lifted arrogant projectile as gripe ball?

Overshoot or underplay enemy rights,
Miss fit charged by the trigger happy brigade,
Blooms and bottoms out in fine rivalry points;
Self propelled guns to leave unfired shells around?

On the home front Howitzer powder monkeys,
Rest in peace to pleasure new silent glitches,
Old stories of their valor and fighting skills,
Victims of love bombshell hits, in stun attacks.

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  • misticmoonlite gold member
    August 11, 2009
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    oh my this

    was a real take on the picture,life can be seductive if you let it,lol
    thank you for this entry
    good luck
    Linda


  • ScarsFade
    August 3, 2009

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    I think this was a very real poem. I can just feel the intense atmosphere...you have a very genuine style please continue your poetry...you have such talent...much <3...scars.