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Behind the Smile

Do you really love me?
Do you ever think about me?
Do you realy need me to stand beside you?

I feel nothing.


All I see is nothing, and nothing seems real.
It's like walking in the dark with no light's to guide.

Answer me,
this hopeless soul is crying for help.
For the inane minds of simple human living.
Waiting, Yearning for something can't be seen.


Is this still love when I am still crying?

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sad feeling attacked again. . .

uuh, what do you think about it?

    I plan to revise this poem: please leave constructive criticism!
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  • Captain Jenny
    August 3
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    Wow. Excellent write, Roxy. Full of emotion.

    ~Love Lae