Eyes looking from an open mind sees all
Author notes
I do not claim the picture used with this piece as my own. Picture found on photobucket.
A contest entry
- ...What is in Your Cookie?... by Desire.
1221 points, ended August 8, 26 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Whoa!
So true! What a great fortune cookie line.
Congrats on the trophy. 
Well deserved. It takes a good writer to have a profound impact in one line & you aced it. 
Bravo. 
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Very nice (;
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That is very profound! And the fortune cookie really was a great thing to use to get your words across. Sounded like confucious! Congrats on your silver trophy, it was well deserved.
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WHOA!
This is probably one of the best short poems I have ever read coming out so beautifully in the most subtle approach! I'm really speechless by the exquisiteness and uniqueness of a such a toddler poem(by length). What a remarkable piece I really have nothing to say but DAMN, WOW, and WHOA!!! LOL!
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oh
you are quite right an open mind will see that it is a mind within the universal mind that knows all and sees all....a great write...the less the more.....keep well my friend
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Absolutely
An open mind opens the eyes to things unseen before. Then comes acceptance.
Congrats on the Silver.
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Excellently written to grab up the Silver chalice and so true about life too.
Closed minds get nowhereand they are very fast getting there. 
Well done... Scott
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Thank You!
Thank You for Your entry: Fortune Cookie
Your words tugged hard at Spirit and after reading several times ~
I'm Honored also Humbled You took the time to pen for this contest
I do Hope You Enjoyed making Your own Fortune Cookie saying~
You took the prompt and brought forth much for the Mind to feast upon~
Bravo!! When I digest words written, images come through that grab hard~
What came to me after reading: Ooooooh now this one I kept seeing
octopus tentacles reaching out for some reason
However that is to be Interpreted
Very Witty phrase and You know I am shown that talking door from
Alice in Wonderland...
Also am shown...
how Tolerant we would be of another person's imperfections
with such an opportunity to see beyond what is in front of us
Color and Creed would not pose such restrictions-reservations
in some people's -eyes-...
Love the direction You took with this prompt
Hopefully my comment to Your write makes sense
Powerful Entry and Message You have brought forth
Thank You for sharing Your Talent also Voice
also best wishes to You in the contest Sweet Soul
Many blessings too 
with much love and light~ Desire~*~
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Wonderful and wisdomatic!!!!
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Isn't that the truth. Great one liner. Good luck in the contest. ~~Iridessa~~
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I have to agree with that statement and sentiment, though I read somewhere else the other day someone say: "But an open mind is easier to fill with shit". lol Sorry, couldn't resist.
Nice, short, relevant statement here.
Good write.
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break the shell
and don't mind the crumbs
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