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Truly Mr. Nice Guy?

You are always close to my heart
You put a smile on my lips
With those words that you say
Got me thinking of the day we met
Got me thinking of love
Oh baby, got me thinking of love
Your words send shivers down my spine
My thoughts turn to you
I wonder is this love
Or just my imagination running wild?
Tell me you will be here by my side every step of the way
Don’t leave my side even for a moment
I want you here with me always
Want to feel your warm embrace
Want to feel your loving touch
Want you by my side
Baby, hold me in your arms
Flash me that smile
Make me melt with just one glance
But baby, please just don’t leave
Are you a good guy
Or just like all the rest
Baby, please tell me
I’m desperate to know
I think I’ve fallen for your kindness and compassion
Baby, is this you or all just a façade?
My thoughts are running wild
My emotions are a storm

Please tell me what you think

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  • fantastic

    love your poem!


  • spot49
    October 20

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    this is a great poem my favorite part is actually the last two lines!! The only thing that doesn't sound just right is the repeated use of baby...but other than that this poem was amazing!!! i honestly forgot how good your poems are myself!


  • PoetBoy2008
    August 14
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    Amazing, i love it, i forgot that i love reading your poems.

  • I think the last two line really sum up the poem. Good job!


  • EmoAngel14
    August 3
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    wow

    thats great it has alot of emotion, alsoits very to the point. i get exactaly wat u mean.....

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