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Dear Santa

Dear Santa,

I'm just a little kid
but I saved up all my dough
maybe if you visit,
we can chat and play in snow

Money can't get me
what I'm asking for
it'll take hope
and so much more

I want him to love me
and catch me when I fall
I don't need more toys
I don't need a doll.

I want his smile
to light up my world
so Santa, please help me;
I'm just a little girl

A contest entry

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  • thelordreigns gold member
    August 29
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    This is very sweet and full of childish innocence.

    Thanks so much for your entry!

    - joanne -


  • UncleDunk gold member
    August 6
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    I really like this poem. Cheered me up, it did.


  • Legend silver member
    August 3

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    I love the innocence of this piece one can actually get inside the mind of this little girl.Although you do not mention who it is the little girl is look to for love one assumes it is her father
    An excellent read Thank you