dear yaya
i could never trust myself , so i could never trust anyone. does this mean i never had friends . or does it mean i'll never have friends?
trusting people was never my thing.
imaginary friends were more fit for
me because i knew they would never
hurt me or leave.
i never understood trust . i never
felt any trust either. i know it's
something that just happens but
it never happened to me. i've
never felt ok with telling people
about me. i was scared of being judged
someone like you knows how to trust or why would you want people to write about it maybe your a person who could teach me to trust. because being so insecure can really have an affect on a broken person.
i lied. i've trusted a person before. he was my
best friend . i was not his though. i was the random
girl he talked to who didn't mean a thing. the girl
who he didn't think anything of. well i thought the
world of him. i told him anything and everything.
but trust is so easily broken i'd rather not have it. in the end it hurts us more then we indented . trust is not something i can write about. i can't have trust for a stranger. sorry yaya . you could never be trusted by someone like me.
Sincerely lani .
Author notes
well . once again this realy isn't related to trust . but i've tried to make itwas if i was writeing to you. goodluck to me :]
A contest entry
- this is what we get for trying; by rainbows..
700 points, ended August 16, 10 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What did you think
Comments
1 - 5 of 5
-
this is really good. the narrative style was really good. good luck in the contest
-
If you cannot trust, then love will always be a contradicting force inside you, like gravity pulling back down on a rocket tryingto escape the planets orbit.
-
awsome! I like the narrative style of this poem all I could suggest is make sure all "i'"
are capital when you are refuring to yourself. Good luck in the contest! -
Yeah I can relate...
I love the way you wrote this.
Good luck in the contest
-
yes. goodluck to you. (:
*huggles*
trust is something.
haha.
Adding your comment:
1 - 5 of 5
