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I do Surrender

I got lost along the way,
I always meant to do the right thing.

God was there all along,
I just couldnt see Him.

Everytime I was side tracked,
He showed me the way.

God was paitent,
never pushing me.

I wish I could have seen
He has loved me through it all.

I know it is to late God,
But I do surrender to you.

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  • PrabhuDayal Khattar silver member
    August 3

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    Yes..this is the last and first option which one should follow..very truthful impressive poetry you did..well done my friend...and thanks for sharing it...