Give me these moments.
Give me a chance.
She means everything
to me.
I can't stop you,
your will is strong.
As am I.
But I abandon my pride,
When I ask you...
If you search me,
and you find some good...
Will you give her back to me?
If you take her, then all is lost.
My light dies with her,
I do not fear the dark.
It's the shade of death that terrifies me.
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I don't pray, I don't know. I just really need him to hear me.
That's Vanessa, (the pic)my best friend.
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This was very touching..you penned a gem..i feel hope , sadness, resolve..many emotions in this..i'm impressed lady..
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I don't pray either, but i think judt getting your message out to be heard is just as good, this was strong poem. very solid, and meaningful different fomr your other stuff,
lovely way with words as always
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To me , prayer is only a thought structure , if it is true,there is no need to bring words to make prayer..we are connected as soon as we are true to be connected...well said words...
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I do pray... and will now.
This is a hard hitting poem , for I know of this kind of want for another person. You have done well.
Dearest Lord,
A moment of Praise, I thank YOU for giving me another day and I thank YOU for all the blessings You have given and I have yet to see... Thank you..
I know not the issue at hand, I know not the trials others go through, And I need not know because You Dear Lord, Brought us into this world knowing every thing about us, from the number of hairs on our head to the color of our eyes and whom and what we will become. As it is made per Your Will. As this situation , I plead on my knees Father that you hear this womans cries, her pleas to you Lord.>Whatever is at hand Father I know You can mend her, I know You can heal all involved. Whatever Your Will is Lord, see them through this. Hold them close. I ask this in Your most Precious Name..Amen
Sorry Addy love, I have to, it was laid upon my heart and know this, you are loved and I am here for you. Many can relate but only One can heal and if Its His Will all can be nurtured and delivered...
Love you
Tory
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this is a powerful write. so sad.
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I can really relate to this poem, which is why I think I like it so much. The last especially caught my attention. Very emotional and very well-written.
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Humbly and simply put. You know I'm not great when it comes to stuff like this.... but I've prayed for her too. Well done.
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Thats so sad. This person is so important to you and i can understand the resentment of them being taken from you. I know how it feels for someone to mean this much to you...and not want them taken away.
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