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My Allie

a year
one full year
and your voice has yet to reach these dying ears
as I cling on so deeply to those days we spent together
that eternal summer
those perfect days
I cannot help but think
that this just might be goodbye

Allie I wasn't lying when I said you were the one
I wasn't omitting some strange fallacy from these lips
but when your name is uttered by this tongue
the world spins with eternal majesty

but it's been a year Allie
one whole year
and still no reply
I guess those days at the carnival weren't as monumental for you
I guess laying in the streets at night wasn't real to you
but they were for me Allie
they still are to me

this summer romance
I guess to you it's just summer lovin'
so you can just move on with your life
find some rich man that'll do you right
but he'll never be the one for you

I may be a son of a bitch Allie
but you're a pain in my ass
and you always will be
like right now
not answering my letters
Allie you're a pain in my ass

but that's just why it's meant to be Allie
'cuz I ain't afraid to tell you that
and you're always real with me
this year might have been a year without your words
but it wasn't a year without your visage
I saw you in every corner of this town
I saw you dance with me
I saw you swim with me
but most of all
I saw you're smile

you're smile that was always there
and that night when it was me and you...
Allie I will get us that house
and some day, who knows when
you'll come back to me

that's my prayer tonight
that's all I hope for in this life
just for you Allie
and I'll find a way
I will

I love you
I'll be seeing you
-Noah

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  • FalseShadow
    August 4
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    I agree, this is very much Noah, your win was well deserved

    Excellent job

  • I loooove this!! Haha this is Noah right here. You brought what was said/done in the movie/book into this poem and made it very poetic while still getting your point across and making it seem like a letter. Great job and best wishes