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The Sad Song of a Siren

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The way she may never love
for she must always kills the lover,
it's a way one girl is destined to live
for she may never see the hope,
she shall only curse the blessed
damning them to forever rest.

There is no loss nor is there a gain,
for she must always live in pain,
she lets no man see tomorrow
or beg for another day,
she can only wish she was normal,
and die in a sleepless rest.

She can never plead for happiness
there is no place where they will take,
she knows she's nothing but a monster
the one that must fear,
she can only hope for death
and to be forgotten like the rest...

This all courses through her mind
as she perfectly sings:
the sad song of the Siren, and is

then gone into the sea...

Author notes

I wrote it about a Siren girl... who doesn't want to be her horrible race of beautiful, man-eatting, monsters

Tell me how much it sucked, le sigh

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  • pkoirish
    September 4

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    wonderful and dark

    The way she may never love
    for she must always kills the lover,
    it's a way one girl is destined to live
    for she may never see the hope,
    she shall only curse the blessed
    damning them to forever rest.

    Incredible imagery and emotion...
    PKO


  • Agrona
    August 16

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    (bows low)

    This was very sad Aunt Kioa. But at the same time makes perfect sense. To dream to be something different, to no longer be a monster and yet continue what it is that one does, because that is how they are. So sad knowing they cannot escape their fate.

    (smiles sadly)

    You captured it perfectly.

    Your Czarina,
    ~SEra

  • Awwah... Tis sad. T.T

    This reminds me of a movie somewhat. But this is very good, you don't suck. =] Very good and talented in this, my friend.

    Keep up the good work.

    =♥= Mollipop =♥=

  • that is a good poem! isent a siren a mermaid?

    • No, a Siren is a greek mythological creature who ate men and destoryed stuff ^^ the can change forms ^^

  • This was awsome, it didn't suk at all!

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