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Cold Dream

my eyes are closed

am i dreaming?

my body's cold

am i dreaming?

my lips are stone

am i dreaming?

my limbs won't move

am i dreaming?

i open my eyes

am i dreaming?

only to find

am i dreaming?

you walking away

am i dreaming?

but i cannot move

am i dreaming?

i try and scream

am i dreaming?

but your gone

Its not a dream......

well i like it ....whatcha think!?!

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  • PrInCeSsOfRoCk gold member
    August 17

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    I'm a terrible owner! i havnt been around for my kitty kitty, how sad

    but im here! and loving this. i related to it soooo much. ive been there...it feels like a horrible dream but its not and its a terrible and scary feeling. loved the repitition in it, made it flow with a fast pace.

    nice work!