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Neither Use Nor Ornament

Neither use nor ornament
We used to call this thing a government
You know...
Where stiffs in white collar suits get more expenses
While the boys sent out to get the oil
Get shot.
“Poorly equipped.”

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  • Andrew Wood
    August 2

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    brilliant imagination

    that is a seriously good take on the prompt... i came up with it and would't have dreamed of going near politics with it... and so true as well. fabulous powers of perception... well done ^^

    Andy