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Anniversary

Ten years of love
have taught me

                            how to  h a t e.

A contest entry

CRITIQUE ME PLEASE

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  • Perception
    August 3

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    Oh wow! You actually made me giggle! I know that's not the impact you probably wanted... But this is soooo true!
    Thanks for entering! I really love the impact on this one!
    Best of luck!
    - Perception