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American beauty.

sparkling tears.

f.a.k.e personalities,

s
  h
    a
      llow,    --->oblivious.

but don't worry, it's [only] skin    .
                                                      .
                                                        .
                                                        v
                                                      deep.

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  • SillyGillysGirl
    October 13
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    i liked it alot, very clever


  • Perception
    August 3

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    I don't really understand poetry like this.. I'm not too sure if I read it right, however...
    Thanks for entering
    and best of luck!
    - Perception