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My mind's adrift...
It's constantly moving
like the waves of the ocean
Each thought a passing fancy
being replaced by a new one
I cannot seem to gather them.
Rapidly changing direction
as so not to be caught
they are on a rampage
I try to tame the inner beast...
but to no avail
I wish for once I could make sense
of this mumble jumble
that warps my mind
then maybe...
the "waves" of the ocean
will settle down
and find some calmness yet

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  • Simply Olivia
    August 3
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    Very nicely expressed

    I can relate to this.

    • THank u for your comment on my work. I am glad to know u understand where I was going with this. I appreciate your kind words.