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My Wish From Afar

If I saw a shooting star,
Falling from the sky afar
I would turn to the heavens above,
And wish for my one true love
To be sent to love only me,
So that I'd be forever happy

I hope you like my poem

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  • ScarsFade
    August 2

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    sounds like a simple wish and i believe that it's already in action, one day that person will just wander right into your life. i think this is such a sweet sentiment it reminds me of lullabies....well written...much <3..scars.


    • Janjan
      August 2
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      Dear ScarsFade: Thank-you for reading my poem. That was really fast. I was still choosing my background, and colors. I'm so very glad that you liked it. Love, Janjan xoxo