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there's water on the tile

17 days ago
someone told me something
that changed the
way i exist.

and he's erased
the pictures
and deleted
the words
but he never
fixed the leaky
faucet or
unstopped the sink
and it dripped until
it over flowed
and there's water
on the tile
and all i can do
is try my best
not to slip and fall.

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  • Patpowers silver member
    August 2
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    OUCH!

    Just be careful of where you are headed! Good job on this work! I liked it...made me smile just a bit. THANKS!