I'm laying here..
Thunder roaring..
Trees are blowing..
Seems kind of gloomy..
And now..
It pisses me off most..
Negativity and silence..
Why all the tention??
Why all the petty shit?
I sometimes get confused
I don't understand why..
I woke up today all blahh
With nothing to say.
No positive reaction...
Why must I feel this way?
Is it my bi-polar shit?
Is it my emotions?
Why does that scare you?
Sorry....
I can't change who I am!!
And I won't!!
My words turn out in Mummblez!!
Nobody seems to understand me..
Maybe I just need someone..
Someone to comprend me..
Cause everyone around me is so damn ugh....
But for some reason, its always turn on me.
I don't fucking understand it.
I'm the one that misunderstands it..
I don't know if I can take it..
I just want to break it.
Sorry, No more..
I'm Not sorry for being me!
Damn it, I'm stronger than this.
Maybe...
I just want to cry..
Then I'll find myself again,
Then I'll feel free..
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great
hello this is amazing
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Let it out lass....
it will wash it all away...
its a hard life little gypsy...
you express it well...
were all strangers in this world...
all our foibles and concerns consume us....
bring back the magic,
dont make life so tragic......
Its all a dream lass...
Your comment is valued ten fold knowing
what a fine observer of life you are
and the heart felt poetry you write.
Bless you always
little gypsy,
Liam
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I too want to cry.. don't know why it always happen..
we know the ways,w e know the love will last, but it does not..
anyway, nice write
keep writing
by
the poet of hearts and beautiful words
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lol nice write.
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Perhaps, but all of us need that time to let out an emotional buildup, and cry. I haven't done so in some time, but DAMN did it feel good the last time i did. Editorially, i have a few things. Spelling. some syntax. Use of vernacular and onomatopeia. In some cases and uses, very useful and accentuating, but i don't see it here. As a whole, as a piece? WELL DONE! individual and internal conflict, defining yourself as you are, very well put together. I look forward to reading more from you!
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