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Hearts

If you tear my heart out,
I'll tear out yours
and put it in me,
then sew mine into you.

We were made for eachother.
Do you not know that I love you?

Author notes

Boyfriend/girlfriend break up. One still wants the other, even after his/her own heart has been torn out by the other.

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