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a moment

Intense, pure light drifted down
toward the dusky horizon

A sunbeam found me
past desks and walls
that could not mute its shine

As I stood bathed in its light and warmth

he said,

“For a person of faith …
this is a good sign”









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  • secberm
    October 4
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    'Tis a good sign indeed! :-)


  • white stone
    September 6

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    Very cool. The light embraces us all, regardless of the dark we perceive. Simply and elegantly stated. I rode the beam of light in the eyes of my mind.


  • Puppydog gold member
    September 4

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    BEAUTIFUL!!!!

    Always to me this sight of a sunset with rays of sun streaming down is always moving and touches a special place in my heart.


  • CelfistJett
    August 14

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    Ah, you paint quite a vivid image for the readers (I), a very well written poem. You write fairly similar to I, using run-ons that break past lines. Kudos!


  • Pisces rainbow gold member
    August 2

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    lovely imagery that points to Divine
    just lovely
    God bless you my friend...


  • Mallig gold member
    August 2

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    I love this, this is so beautiful and uplifting, so filled with "light" in so many ways. In brevity you have said so much. I'm so glad you posted this!

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