How did we get here?
All fear dissolved.
Only acceptance
litters the brain now,
fortified by loved
stained visions
of a beautiful day …
A breathtaking life
awaits us, strips us
of all impurity.
Like ring and finger,
our hearts entwined,
forever and always.
Author notes
I just got engaged (:
In a list
A contest entry
- Happy moments by Sonya-Erasmus.
500 points, ended August 24, 9 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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This is beautiful! And CONGRATULATIONS!
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thank you
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This was exceptionally beautiful because of it's simplicity.
These lines were dazzling
"fortified by loved
stained visions
of a beautiful day …
A breathtaking life
awaits us, strips us
of all impurity."
Well penned, well versed, and well done. And congrats.
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so damm
aint it too early to speak of marriage at 25? just asking. but the poem is beutiful I must say. well I cant say much myself. Lol. Keep writing poet.
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Congratulations and good luck in life and with poetry. This simple poem carry out your heart as well as your poetical voice. It is not easy to say so much with a minimum of words. Great, really great done.
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thank you so much
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A secret about that ring...
I dare say it strips folk of impurity... but actually causes them to think about the cost of being impure where they previously never even contemplated such. Tis as lovely a thought however... as is your engagement... and likewise the way you have expressed your heartfelt vision of the new path which awaits you as a couple and not just as an individual. Blessings for a beautiful beginning to the both of you. -
Congrats.... make sure to share this with her over a romantic evening....
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Congrats! Lovely write, touching and sweet.
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CONGRATULATIONS on the engagement, i am so happy for you!!! Big big hug to you, and this poem was beautiful. So many congratulations.
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this is a work of art =D
its so nice that i feel like i should thank you for writing it lol
& congratulations on your engagement
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A sparse, but most poignant piece of poetry here, a marvelous economy of words... I loved it!!!
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thank you that means a lot coming from one so talented
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Awe, this is so sweet.
I love this line
"fortified by loved
stained visions"
Extremely well thought out
Great poem
Thanks so much for entering
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thank you im glad you enjoyed this piece take care
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This is beautiful and such an original take on an age old topic. Congrads! I just got married so we have something in common.
Love,
Amera♥
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what a lovely way to celebrate your engagement... congratulations!!
a smiled the whole way thru - a beautiful poem... wishing you forever and always xx
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smiling from beginning to end. beautiful way to describe your engagement. congratulations
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This was fantastic! I love the last stanza with the simile you use but my favorite line is, "A breathtaking life awaits us, strips us of all impurity."
Your page said you are usually negative but I don't see much negativity here. This was amazing!!!
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thank you, i do sometimes get happy lol
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beautiful
hey john..
its a very good piece..congratulations on ur engagement..an awesome poem to celebrate this special occasion..it depicts the excitement of enterin a new phase of life very well..i particularly liked the line "fortified by loved stain visions of a beautiful day..."
well written poem..
best wishes from my side..
take care..
parth
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thank you Parth
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Would not change a thing in this for this is from the heart
and only you know what this poem will mean personally but from the outside it was nicely done and it would me a nice thing to read at the wedding , well congrats and well the best to you two , and what love can make us write and how it come out very magnificiant . thanks was enjoyable .
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Congratulations on your engagement.A lovely poem to celebrate with.May I wish you every happiness, Ros
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this is a stunning piece... i wouldnt revise it personally... and congrats on the engagement
huge hugs,
georgie,
xxx
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thanks for reading and thank you for congrats on my engagement, take care georgie
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Awe, congrats John! I wish you and her luck!
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thank you, hows u?
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love the name and your remark in the authors notes... grand!
congrats!
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