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Romantic Couple

in just a moment's glance he
fell in love with her as she
walked down the road feeling romantic

the feeling of being romantic
came from the way he...
she couldn't say, could she?

a lady must not kiss and tell, she
was a true lady of the romantic
sort but then so was he

he held her as she told him romantic words

Author notes

my first ever tritina ^_^ its basically a half sextain/sestina ^_^

i know its pretty crap lol

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  • Amera gold member
    August 4

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    Bravo! I love your first tritina! It's in perfect form and expresses emotion along with poetic flow. Standing ovations!

    Love.
    Amera♥