Alone again
Alone forever
Sitting in these shadows
Darkness in every corner
Pain in every scar
Alone waiting for you in the rain
Alone waiting for you in this shame
Never thought you could make me break
Never thought you could make me shake
Alone once again
Sitting in these shadows
Darkness in every corner
Pain in every scar forever
A contest entry
- 1000 Titles. by Antebellum.
550 points, ended August 13, 90 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Comments
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I really like this.
Maybe reverse the first two lines.
so its "alone forever
alone again"
so that the last word of the first and last line is 'forever' -
Good Luck In The Contest Hun
This Is A Good Write
Keep Up The Good Work! :-)
Keep Penning
Love Always
Ericaa xx
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