Eyes, shedding a single tear
Staring straight through me
I speak but they can't hear
And they all emerge from the distance
But I am invisible and do not appear
Hearts, all beating the same song
But mine is black and broken
And I get the melody all wrong
They are all laughing
But as I cry I know I don't belong
Souls, together moving on
Do they need me?
Do I even belong?
They are all beautiful birds
But I'm the ugly duckling, who never became a swan
Together, them leaving me back
Wavering behind
And my life fades to black
But what does it matter?
I'm just demeaning from the pack...
A contest entry
- Title contest are so cool... :) by Leanna-bean.
600 points, ended August 11, 17 entries
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Comments
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This is a really good poem and it fits the title very well but I have to say the last line in the poem doesn't make any sense... You would have to so "I'm Just Deterring from the pack." thank you for taking the time to enter my contest and good luck to you
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ready to write? I really like this title I can't wait to read your poem!!!
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