in the bay
tugging at its anchor--
the sun
Andrew Hide
28~03~2004
Author notes
First published in Simply Haiku September 2004
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Written March 28th, 2004
In a list
A contest entry
- Contestku by Cemetery Rose.
300 points, ended April 5, 2004, 43 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Haikus! by Dlvvanzor.
300 points, ended October 15, 2007, 18 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What did you think
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Thanks for entering!
I wish you the best of luck.
I hope you had fun.
-Dlvvanzor (Like my haiku comment for the haiku contest? lol)
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Vividly described!
Wow, very interesting! Lines 1 and 2 go very well together. L3 is a plesant surprise actually! Very good imagery to visualise. I liked it because it is simple when you read it, makes you think{it resonates very well} and has got more meaning than meets the eye at the first glance.
Best Wishes,
-Charishma -
Very good Andrew! Nice imagery in this haiku!
Good luck in the contest!
Mari
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this clinches it...bookmarking this one so i can come back and read more of your work...soon!
~liz -
Ack
If I had known you were entering I wouldn't have! 
This is superb Andrew. Something I wish I had written!
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i love this...i can just see this completely...an ocean view with the sun laying upon it...beautifully written...good luck
God bless
-Stacy- -
haiku-rific
Lovely haiku! The imagery is striking....I can visualize it well. As always your 'kus are wonderful! Thank you for entering!
Peace and love
Susan -
Excellent
Hi Andrew:
Always a master of Haiku. Very well written, with such simplicity, yet full of meaning. Thanks. Bill -
This is really good and I knew what you were describing even before the author note... Well done, susan
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nice, makes me think of reflections on the water as dusk arrives
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This brings back visions of a bay I once knew that glittered in the sunlight
THank you - Beautiful
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